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Love Came Down

Light and love, heavenly star Overcome the world, and sin sick hearts Value others and family more than self Everlasting life to all he brings Christian faith never fails Angels protect me, when I fail Mother Mary, virgin birth, faith in God's holy word End the sacrifice Defeated death, hell and the devil Our journey here is but a trial Will judge our hearts friend or foe Name written in the book of life, eternal life! For Brian Strands contest Love came down acrostic.

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/19/2009 10:31:00 AM

I do believe that the way we learn to love in this world ensures passage to God's kingdom, Doris. Beautiful work and a well deserved win in Brian's contest! Much love, Carolyn

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 12/19/2009 1:48:00 AM

Congratulations, on your success in Brian’s “Love Came Down” acrostic contest with this heartfelt poem. Enjoy the honor, Doris. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Juliane Thomas

Date: 12/11/2009 6:53:00 AM

Beautiful poem and a well-deserved win in Brian's contest! Thank you so much for all of your kind comments ~Juliane

Marty Owens

Date: 12/10/2009 6:10:00 PM

Congratulations on the contest Doris...Love your acrostic...Marty

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 12/10/2009 4:45:00 PM

,very nice poem that grabbed a win -here ,Doris! Enjoy the honor!- Robert

Joyce Johnson

Date: 12/10/2009 4:24:00 PM

Very nice Doris. Congratulations on your win. Lvoe, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/10/2009 3:31:00 PM

Congrats, Doris, on your winning poem in Brian's contest... U are always such an inspiration and your humor is unique .. thankxxx for your comments on my poetry tonight... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/10/2009 10:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's Christmas Love Contest Doris. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/10/2009 7:56:00 AM

Doris, Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Love Came Down" Contest! Great job! Peace and love, Audrey

Brian Strand

Date: 12/10/2009 7:52:00 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest Doris.Rgds Brian.My latest contest 'Christmas Parlour Poetry' is now open

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/2/2009 9:57:00 AM

What a great take on the acrostic challenge, Doris! "Our journey here is but a trial," but if we think the way you do in this write, surely we will find eternal life. Very wise words, inspiring message of hope, even when "Love Came Down." Awesome! Love, Carolyn

Colleen Bono

Date: 12/2/2009 8:36:00 AM

I wish I could figure out how to do different poem forms.But I will keep trying.like this poem.Thaks for sharing.