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Love Calls

He is day's melody adorned in sun-blessed hues rich and dark the warmth, he always finds time caressing my hours with whispers of thousand crickets commands flowers to unfold for the blooming of our dreams I am his starlight his woman neutral but luminescent, all seasons in his eyes. He leans on me for water's sustenance bathes away all sorrow, worships my eyes with lips of reverence and wonder --- in love, he calls my name at night time, he sings in thanks. 2-13-2014 Feeling The Love Contest of Charlotte Puddifoot

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Date: 2/26/2014 6:19:00 PM
Hello Ashley, Congratulations, on your win, thank you for sharing, and helping the reader Feel The emotions of Love through your poem. ~SKAT~
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Date: 2/21/2014 8:00:00 PM
Wow, I really felt this. excellent deescription with such a fluid dreamy feel. Congrats on the win
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Date: 2/21/2014 8:51:00 AM
Very good contrasting imagery, Ashley! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/21/2014 4:29:00 AM
Enjoyed the write on feeling the love and congrats on the fine win, Ashley
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Date: 2/19/2014 5:41:00 PM
I was so impressed with this poem, it stuck in my mind from the first time I read it; wonderful romantic feeling in these lines; the last line linking nicely with the first; absolutely beautiful, what talent! congrats on your win in my contest :)
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Date: 2/13/2014 12:55:00 PM
Nicely penned with some very great lined :) enjoyed
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