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a meandering breeze shuffles starlight while a serenade whispered moves to tears a low hanging moon ~ the goodnight kiss lingers AP: 2nd place 2022 Submitted on July 13, 2022 for contest A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE sponsosred by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 5TH Originally posted on July 12, 2022

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Date: 7/20/2022 7:59:00 AM
"the goodnight kiss lingers" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/20/2022 6:33:00 PM
Thanks, Christuraj ~
Date: 7/19/2022 7:59:00 PM
I’ll plagiarise gw’s comment ~ Awesome!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/19/2022 8:49:00 PM
That's the kind of plagiarism I love ~ thank you so much for fav'ing ~
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Date: 7/19/2022 8:01:00 PM
A fave, in fact!
Date: 7/18/2022 8:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your contest win, Line. Your pen is just superb and your poem with great rhyme and stunning metaphors. Blessings
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/18/2022 6:31:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sotto ~
Date: 7/14/2022 10:38:00 AM
Excellent and best wishes in Brian’s contest. All the lines are outstanding and draw the reader in, Liove Pamagiota xxx
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/15/2022 10:23:00 PM
Thank you very much, Panagiota ~
Date: 7/13/2022 10:24:00 AM
Just beautiful, Line. I love "shuffles starlight"
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Date: 7/14/2022 4:03:00 AM
Thank you very much, Ann ~
Date: 7/12/2022 8:58:00 PM
Awesome, Line! Gosh, I rarely use that word. But it applies here!!! ~ gw
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Date: 7/13/2022 2:58:00 AM
Thanks, Gershon ~
Date: 7/12/2022 10:07:00 AM
Line, this is beautiful. I love the middle line, especially..."moves to tears a low hanging moon". Ah, what exquisite imagery.
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Date: 7/12/2022 3:24:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jim ~

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