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Love Bungled

On the edge of a tear her world is bungled so is her love life yet she feels alive She doesn’t recognize what she’s feeling Sadness deep in her throbbing heart She senses her aloneness her loneliness Surprisingly good in some strange way There’s a certain sturdiness about it Or maybe that’s only her cynical core Being proven right again Makes her almost chuckle She feels to the depths of her heart A tenderness of no parallel She’s somehow happy to realize her heart not totally turned to stone She’s actually let someone in so deep She can be touched even stirred Did she ever tell you She doesn’t really believe in love It’s for the chosen few For others, not everyone, not her AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on March 22, 2018

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Date: 3/23/2018 12:16:00 AM
"To feel alone ....at least know still alive . Love IS for everyone. Beautiful as always! bbn
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Date: 3/23/2018 8:10:00 AM
Absolutely, Barbara. Notwithstanding temporary moods. Line xx
Date: 3/22/2018 10:22:00 PM
I love this couplet.... "On the edge of a tear Yet I feel so alive" Just wonderful!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/22/2018 10:23:00 PM
Thank you, Kurt, for your most appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 3/22/2018 10:02:00 PM
On the edge of a tear is an intense expression of many a feeling ... Very good objective correlative ...
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Date: 3/22/2018 10:23:00 PM
Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Probir.
Date: 3/22/2018 9:17:00 PM
Very lovely poem Line!! Bravo!!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/22/2018 9:26:00 PM
Thank you, Robertina. Most appreciated.

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