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Love Bomb

I will soon drop a bomb into your lovers hideaway You will feel my passion exploding within your very soul His defenses will never separate you from my love First attempt at a Sijo.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/29/2013 3:10:00 PM
Very drastic move on your part..Great winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 1/27/2013 1:42:00 AM
Wow! Love this great Sijo! Congratulations on your fantastic win my dear poet friend Richard! love/hugs,Leonora
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Date: 1/26/2013 4:57:00 PM
Richard...Congratulations in Rick's awesome "SIJO" contest. take care~PD
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Date: 1/26/2013 2:37:00 PM
Congratulations on another win! Well deserved. Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/26/2013 2:02:00 PM
WHOA!! How did I ever miss this one!! BIG congrats on this. It's explosive!
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Date: 1/14/2013 8:14:00 AM
Wish I had written that! Cheers!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/14/2013 8:38:00 AM
Thanks, Jack.
Date: 1/13/2013 11:40:00 PM
Yeap even better :D I really enjoyed it for twice :D
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/13/2013 11:53:00 PM
Thanks Yanny!
Date: 1/13/2013 8:36:00 PM
Soupmail
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/13/2013 10:40:00 PM
On my way.
Date: 1/13/2013 8:16:00 PM
I really enjoyed this short poem.(: Good work and I will definitely read more later.((:
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/13/2013 10:40:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 1/13/2013 4:46:00 PM
Great sijo Richard :D and strong love bombs :D - hug, yanny
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/13/2013 4:52:00 PM
Thanks Yanny, not sure if I have done this form correctly.
Date: 1/13/2013 2:47:00 PM
love this powrrful sijo, my friend - congrats on all your wins : )
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/13/2013 4:11:00 PM
Thanks Jack
Date: 1/13/2013 12:30:00 PM
Very lovely and well done Richard! love,Deb
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/13/2013 1:07:00 PM
Thanks Deb, I appreciate the visit and always happy for some love.
Date: 1/13/2013 12:00:00 PM
Richard great first attempt....David
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/13/2013 12:07:00 PM
Thanks David.

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