Love Birds

LOVE BIRDS Shattered Vows-- Hollow Words With no wings It’s not a bird. Victoria Anderson-Throop

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Poet Tacito

Date: 7/24/2013 5:18:00 PM

Quite, quite true...but, that makes me wonder. If a bird has its wings clipped, can't it still walk forward? Random thought. Strong message here.

Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 8/2/2013 6:16:00 PM

Drake..true, but clipped wings, are still wings....a canary with clipped wings does not become a chicken.....I always enjoy your comments....thanks for reading!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/24/2013 3:18:00 PM

this is very interesting. Nice to see you up and posting a new poem!

Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 7/24/2013 3:37:00 PM

thanks andrea...have no wifi, so have to go to the library..Alaska summers are too good to spend on computers...still looking for a flat of my own..takes a lot of time, and it feels wasted because I have no luck! hope all I well with you!