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Love At First Sight

from the moment we met ~ two kids in a sandbox ;),

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/20/2021 6:20:00 AM

Congrats on your top win, Maureen. Lots happened between the lines here. lol

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/4/2021 6:37:00 AM

Hi Maureen, I'm just coming to say congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/4/2021 3:09:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win ... lovely and sweet written, Maureen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jeff Connelly

Date: 2/23/2021 7:31:00 PM

Maureen, this surely is the greatest LOVE poem ever written!!! I'm smitten by the simplistic open ended possibilities that these two new lovers will discover in the future that lays before them. I can't help but smile, though in a sandbox not meeting my true love; I'll never forget the castles we built and lived in. I love you Maureen. Thank you.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/2/2021 8:46:00 PM

Aw, this is so sweet!! ~ Teeter-tauter

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/1/2021 3:09:00 PM

Lovely image.

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/28/2021 1:00:00 AM

This is an amazing succinct poem, in it says so much..love this. Mo

Niyna Desangre

Date: 1/25/2021 2:49:00 PM

Aww, to relive puppy love anew. I've actually a first-hand memory. Great Poem

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/25/2021 1:14:00 PM

this is charming, maureen!

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/25/2021 12:24:00 PM

WoW! Maureen, That sounds like love at first such sight. And you didn’t have to go a reality tv show! I enjoyed the read. Hope you are doing well:-) Alexis

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/25/2021 10:58:00 AM

Hello Maureen McGreavy, Yes that would be love at first sight. Hugs Darlene.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 1/25/2021 10:51:00 AM

down to the nitty gritty, was it? Aloha! Rico

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/25/2021 10:06:00 AM

I love all the implications of this ~ totally delightful, Maureen

John Lawless

Date: 1/25/2021 9:22:00 AM

....and one lifted his mask and said "I'll show you mine if you show me yours"