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Love Anticipation

Time moves so slowly, as I wait anxiously for you to come to me I breathe so rapidly, as I think about the moment when you'll kiss me with lips of longing I am waiting for what seems like forever, for this day to turn into night Now time is speeding up, moving ever so fast, when I start to fantasize about you Of the romantic things we shall do, once the evening arrives This won't be just another day in our lives No, love has me anticipating, I'm burning up from waiting Flames of passion are starting to take hold of me, as time draws you closer I anticipate learning loving things about you, things I never knew Anticipating time standing still, when this dream comes true

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Date: 1/31/2017 12:28:00 PM
I have enjoyed this love poem,yes I see it as a love poem.Well done. I love that Anticipation song from the 70's it is my favourite.
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Date: 1/21/2017 9:51:00 PM
This beautiful romantic write reminds me of that "Anticipation" song from the 1970's! P & L~Che
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Date: 1/21/2017 1:28:00 PM
Hi Freddie, I really enjoyed this write. You pulled the reader in and had "us" anticipating each and every word. I found this write to be romantic as we well. Well done. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 1/21/2017 8:10:00 PM
Hmmm ... that romantic light is starting to shine bright, I think. Ty, Alexis for the kind words. You always put more fuel in my little creativity engine. Love and kisses to you, dear.
Date: 1/21/2017 1:09:00 PM
This writing has the reader on the edge of the seat!
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 1/21/2017 8:08:00 PM
Aw, Heidi. You say the nicest things. Appreciate your visit, dear. Love and hugs to you.

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