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Love and War

If I were a plant I would be a cactus Beautiful to look at But painful to hold If I were a place It would be Alaska Beautiful, majestic But decidedly cold. For every action There is a reaction Or maybe it's karma I'm told. But, without you to hold me I would have no reason To still be here when I'm old. Josette Key 2009

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Date: 6/23/2009 2:46:00 PM
Powerfull!!!!
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Date: 4/10/2009 6:58:00 PM
jojo...whew!! spinnin' my head!!!great poem! jmg
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Date: 4/5/2009 6:17:00 PM
Well written and perfect allegory.Just to rock on the front porch and give that one a little wink.Enjoyed.........Jim
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Date: 4/5/2009 4:39:00 PM
Concise and endearing. Love the flow. :)
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Date: 4/5/2009 2:15:00 PM
Josette, this is mmm ... mmm ... good! Awesome beauty with powerful ending. Ans wow, I could eat the images. Great write. Love and happiness, my beautiful friend
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