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Love and loss

For my birthday ,
was a puppy ,
cute and friendly ,
it became eventually .

Fluffy and white ,
never used to bite ,
social and active ,
and never used to fight .

But one day ,
a tragedy happened ,
my spirits were dampened ,
and my heart was saddened .

I gave him chocolate ,
A poison to him ,
His face was dim ,
And breathless ….

I took him to the vet ,
Where he treated him  ,
I was praying ,
‘O Lord please save him !’

And  soon he was fine ,
I know he is a brave doggy ,
And who’s doggy is he ??
Of course , he’s mine !! :))

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  1. Date: 1/21/2014 9:12:00 PM
    Hi Saanvi, of course I'm going to visit you my young friend... I read the poem above. It's a heartfelt moment when open a gift, that brings joy to our hearts... It was a very touching to know how sad you got when your puppy needed you.. Glad, to know God answered your sweet heart.... Goodnight... Linda

  1. Date: 1/18/2014 9:06:00 AM
    Adorable and sweet...Yes, too much chocolate is not good for diggies, but dad used it to teach our doggie tricks--That was eons ago. Lovely write...good luck on gcontest.

  1. Date: 1/18/2014 8:29:00 AM
    Enjoyed the humor in the write, Saanvi

  1. Date: 1/18/2014 8:03:00 AM
    very creative...!!! :)) ...thought your dog was real...great job!!! ;))

  1. Date: 1/18/2014 6:42:00 AM
    - There are "dog chocolate" ..... my dog ??loves it. - A friend (your dog) that never fails! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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    Date: 1/18/2014 7:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Anne - Lise , I actually don't have a dog ! Wrote this poem for Charlotte's contest !! :p