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Love and Freedom

I WAS ALONE, AND OH SO COLD. A CHILL TO THE BONE, AND NO ONE TO HOLD. I AM HOME NOW, THE TIME IS DONE. I MADE IT SOMEHOW, NO NEED FOR THIS GUN! LOVE FOUND ME, THE EYES OF AN LATINA. I GIVE HER POETRY, MY GORGEOUS CATALINA! MY BRIANNAS MOTHER, HOLDS ME CLOSE TO HER BREAST. A LOVE LIKE NO OTHER, FOR SHE LOVED ME BEST!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/18/2012 6:40:00 PM
Beautiful, a happy ending :) full of emotion, great write.
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Date: 4/16/2012 8:19:00 AM
This is sweet and powerful. Loneliness runs bone deep
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Date: 4/4/2012 10:22:00 AM
wow..nice to know who this is..i was shocked... SO what is up with your account... your old poems,, pd
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Date: 4/3/2012 10:40:00 PM
HA... welcome, to the soup... this is a very sweet poem,,, love it... and I am curious about who you are... you left me a comment that you are back... always..pd
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Date: 4/3/2012 2:49:00 PM
Beautiful piece, looking forward to reading your work to come -Lily <3
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Date: 4/3/2012 12:12:00 PM
very nice poem..I'm glad you have found happiness and that you're home at last...
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Date: 4/3/2012 5:22:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Eye. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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