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Love and Baggage

You had me blown out, baggage and baffled Our love was on the ropes Blockages of darkness crawling, festering To trust in you as much As a clown painted black A dirge without delivery In shame and ruthlessness I determined to press nerves Or venture without substance But when the storm and wreckage passed I still hear your voice crystallized The shining gem of your impetuousness Slowly you pull me back And offer your greatest hope As excitement turns the page

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/13/2016 9:46:00 PM
Kind of romantic, Justin, Fantastic wording, glad to read your poem tonight. Forever ~LINDA~
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