Love

I would give anything for him to notice me just once, please look my way who am I kidding he will never see He won't stray His eyes sparkle like the sea I will still pray Maybe just maybe he will notice me Why won't she notice I love her smile, please look at me I don't mean to cause a fuss Who am I kidding there will never be a we I will still wish there was an us She sparkles just like the sea Why won't she notice

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Skat A

Date: 10/18/2016 11:03:00 PM

KEISHA, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/11/2016 12:57:00 PM

Keisha one day I will say those words, and wonder as your poem did. A beautiful poem.

Keisha Moyer
Date: 10/12/2016 12:20:00 PM

Thank you so much.