Love

love the world was ending and still we owed each other the unconsummated kisses of all lovers it rained bitterly desperately feverishly it rained with the need of droughts the despair of floods your body unleashed merciless thunder lightning ripped mine into quivering arches you finally slept by the hot thighs of my thought at the edge of a long kiss desperate as the end of the world with bloody lips I rose wrapped you in a dream and with a single gesture stopped the rain

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Nuta Gangan

Date: 3/2/2016 5:49:00 PM

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Date: 3/2/2016 8:51:00 AM

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