Love

Love does amazing work Work in the hearts of the damaged Damaged lives become repaired Repaired to love and live Live happy Happy to share their own love Love does amazing work

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Skat A

Date: 5/21/2016 9:38:00 AM

such a sweet poem.. ----skat*

Thomas Carney

Date: 9/5/2015 2:33:00 PM

I never have heard of love being put the way you expressed; that it works to repair and restore. In this case I do "like" haha the bookends you employed. Overall, good short poem, except I disagree with the word "Happy." To me it is nothing more than an emotion, and I think it is a false goal many couples seek in a relationship, marriage >> and it just does not work that way. Contentment is a better word for me. Anyway, comme ci, comme ca. Good work. Thomas