Love

Love is banded and towering often steps to the high life love is creeping and unexpected but never restless titled but gilded in a process of smooth and cyclic dates and in exchange love is a gift with a receipt some return it or some keep it

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/14/2015 1:23:00 PM

- Welcome to P Soup, Lauren ! - A poem that warms your heart or relieve your pain ... share your own poems here with us - Write poems and send it out into the world, I look forward to your next poem :) - // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 6/9/2015 6:52:00 PM

You pen the truth, indeed. Welcome to the soup.

Skat A

Date: 6/9/2015 11:02:00 AM

Lauren, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2015 10:18:00 AM

A sweet poem, Lauren, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@