Love

I pleaded-you enjoyed, I cried-you laughed, You pleaded-but I couldn't be Othello at your tears,

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/7/2014 7:04:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Ulaaz - I choose your first great and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 12/6/2014 3:00:00 PM

Interesting contrast between enjoyed and tears.Congrat for understanding this face of love,Best regards,O.B

Ulaaz Robertzen
Date: 12/8/2014 11:33:00 AM

Many thanks

Etienne Lariviere

Date: 12/6/2014 1:07:00 PM

very well said, felt the emotion.

Ulaaz Robertzen
Date: 12/8/2014 11:36:00 AM

Thank you.