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Author's Notes:   This is a "Tanka" or a Japanese verse form write on the subject of "Love."  For this write, I've looked at "Love" from the perspective of it being a most emotive force and that intangible something that is so special to all of us as human beings.  As most may be aware, "Love" can both be a rational and an irrational force which can and does shape people individually, as a couple, or even in a group.  It can also make people very happy and can make them very sad, depending up the circumstances at hand.  When two people meet and fall under Love's mesmerizing influence, it acts as that all-important catalyst and synergy which can unite two people as one in heart, body, and soul. This particular view about "Love" actually reflects very much my own personal view of how this powerful emotional force can shape the destiny of two people or can tear their lives asunder.  The syllable count for this Tanka is:  5-7-5-7-7 (for a total of 31 syllables). (Gary Bateman - November 19, 2014) (Tanka poetic format)     

Categories:   allegory, change, emotions, feelings, growth, love, and romance.

Love’s most emotive, And so special to us all. It’s all-consuming . . . Capturing the hearts of two . . . Binding flesh, blood, soul as one! Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved, Schoeningen, Germany (November 19, 2014) (Tanka poetic format)

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Date: 8/9/2015 11:55:00 PM
All consuming indeed! Really enjoyed reading this one - very nicely done! Always, Laura
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Date: 8/11/2015 8:59:00 AM
Thanks Laura!! Love is certainly all-consuming indeed. (Thanks for your deep read of this poem from last year!!) Cheers and Best Wishes Always, Gary
Date: 12/9/2014 1:08:00 AM
Lovely piece Gary...best regards Milly.
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Date: 12/9/2014 4:55:00 AM
Milly, Thanks so much for your read here and for you very nice comment!! (I haven't forgotten you either -- things have been so crazy of late with all of my poet writes and correspondence. I hope all is well with you!!) I will come by you site for a visit soon. Best Wishes Always!! Gary
Date: 11/28/2014 8:22:00 PM
Gary I have to say, I find your "Notes" as fascination as your poetry, and never cease to read all the way through them, and more than once.
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Date: 11/28/2014 9:11:00 PM
Jerry, Thanks so much for you great comments here!! Yup - The notes are quite important for each of my writes. I do them as a historical record of each poem, and since I'm working on my first poetry book for eventual publication next year, they help to keep me on track with everything. Also, I use them to reflect my rationale for each poem and for the poem's technical details. Best Wishes, Gary
Date: 11/23/2014 7:32:00 PM
You truly capture the essence of love here Gary and I must say it flows from heart that loves,great Job...huggs
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Date: 11/24/2014 11:26:00 AM
KAYOD5, You're certainly right about this. The Heart is definitely the center point. Glad you liked this Tanka. Cheers and Best Always, Gary
Date: 11/20/2014 11:59:00 PM
very nice, love that last line.
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Date: 11/21/2014 8:08:00 AM
Thanks Andrea!! I too really like the last line here. This theme, with some of the words I've used in the Tanka, might make a great starter for a really nice Sonnet?? Don't you think so?? I will be over to check out your poems too!! We're all so busy . . . but "fun" busy with our respective writes. Best Always, Gary
Date: 11/20/2014 2:25:00 PM
a true gift of unconditional everlasting beauty excellent pen gary
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Date: 11/20/2014 4:17:00 PM
Liam . . . I've got the "Love Choir of the Leprechauns" singing praises to this one!! Best Wishes Mate, Gary
Date: 11/20/2014 11:38:00 AM
That's such a powerful and heartwarming tanka you've penned here my dear friend, Gary! Yes, true love can be all this you've described here and much much more that depending on the person too as they draw or define love with purity in their own heart. 7 ++++ for me! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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Date: 11/20/2014 4:15:00 PM
"D" Thanks for the super "7" rating here. I'm glad you liked this particular Tanka write on "Love." A most wonderful and powerful emotion indeed!! Your words describe everything perfectly!! Best Always and XOXO!! Gary
Date: 11/19/2014 2:39:00 PM
You describe the kind of true love everyone hopes to find...I especially love the last line...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 11/19/2014 5:11:00 PM
Rhonda, Thanks!! It is a worthy goal indeed!! Best!! Gary
Date: 11/19/2014 2:34:00 PM
You've hit the proverbial nail on the head.
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Date: 11/19/2014 5:10:00 PM
Thanks ML!! I think I did too. Best!! Gary
Date: 11/19/2014 2:18:00 PM
awesome Gary, You captured love well :)
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Date: 11/19/2014 5:09:00 PM
Thanks Cas!! Best!! Gary
Date: 11/19/2014 12:44:00 PM
- Beautiful poem, Gary! - Happiness in life: to love and be loved !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/19/2014 1:22:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise!! You are absolutely right about this. Glad you like this Tanka. (I really enjoyed the co-write that you and Liam posted earlier today -- a really marvelous and wonderful effort indeed!!) Best Always, Gary

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