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Love

It's a feeling that words can't explain, It's a desire that sometimes can't be contained, It's worth more we often know but sometimes cost less than we show, It's a motion for devotion, It's often taken for-granted but never remains the same, We use it for fame and fortune when it's a treasure we all contain. It's a simple four letter word but isn't as simple as it seems, If you've ever been hurt you know exactly what I mean.

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Date: 10/30/2015 12:30:00 AM
Greetings Ashallah. A wonderful write! ;-) Congrats for having your work featured in the Poetry Soup home page! ;-)
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Ashallah Adolphus
Date: 11/20/2015 7:34:00 PM
Thank u
Date: 10/29/2015 7:42:00 AM
It's beautiful,i like
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Ashallah Adolphus
Date: 11/20/2015 7:35:00 PM
Thank u
Date: 10/22/2015 8:45:00 PM
Thank you all for the wonderful words... I appreciate it very much :)
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Date: 10/22/2015 9:10:00 AM
Smiles; that's just how I felt on reading this.
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Date: 10/20/2015 12:42:00 PM
I maintain that Love has been responsible for more hurt and pain than anything else in the world.
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Date: 7/7/2015 1:10:00 PM
:)
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Date: 5/27/2014 8:00:00 AM
Just beautiful - well done!
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Date: 5/16/2014 4:12:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Ashallah. Enjoyed this first poem you posted. Keep writing and sharing your work; I believe you will find much support here.
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Date: 5/15/2014 8:35:00 AM
Hi Ashallah,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/15/2014 4:43:00 AM
amen awesome , like finding the hidden treasure that brings life and love for all within, love it
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Date: 5/14/2014 9:56:00 AM
Thank you for sharing:) It touched my heart
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Date: 5/14/2014 3:36:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Ashallah :) - I choose your first great and moving written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/13/2014 9:44:00 PM
I know exactly how you feel, Ashallah... , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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