Love

My thoughts flow your way More often than not Sometimes when I Watch you walk away I think to myself You might never return Then what would I do I'd be lost without you When I am in your arms It seems like the whole The world goes away I love you That's all I know That's all I want to know

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Khallico Poe

Date: 12/16/2017 5:00:00 AM

Good one.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 4/23/2017 7:38:00 AM

How sweet you are and true in your love. There cannot be a purer expression. You do this so well, and I am sorry your heart was broken at some point. However, what happens brings us to a new understanding and place. It helps us understand what others go through. It's a bit like traveling to a poor country except that they can have the love we lost and that can make us feel our loss even more.

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/18/2013 10:28:00 PM

That's all I wanna know. I would put it.

Debbie Duncan
Date: 2/18/2013 11:13:00 PM

Thank you John.

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 8/26/2012 10:12:00 PM

lovely write..i enjoy this much Debbie..:) have a lovely days:)luv and hug SK

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/30/2012 1:21:00 PM

I love to read sweet and romantic love poem Debbie - this one are well written !!!! - oxox Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan
Date: 7/30/2012 2:10:00 PM

Thank you Anne - Lise ;} you have a blessed day ;}

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 12/6/2011 9:23:00 PM

* "I LOVE THE LOVE I FIND INSIDE THESE SOULFUL WORDS OF SUCH BEAUTY * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL * PRECIOUS DEBBIE * 'TIS ALL I WANT TO DO' * OWWW HOW I CAN ECHO THOSE BEAUTIFUL EMOTIONS OF HEART SOOOO VERY DEEEEPLY * I AM GOING TO FAVOURITE AS I FAVOUR YOUR BEAUTIFUL SELF * THANK YOU * TWAS A JOY TO BEHOLD YOUR BEAUTY AGAIN * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *

Debbie Duncan
Date: 12/11/2011 11:15:00 PM

Hello sarah,, I hope this day finds you happy and loved my sweet friend ;}

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 6/19/2011 6:24:00 AM

I love the simplicity of this poem. Debbie. I wish more were like it. I believe you have inspired me to do one of my own in the future.. not into the mushy gushy stuff .... just not my kinda thing like it is for many others. great poem. Thanks for your encouraging comment

Debbie Duncan
Date: 9/5/2011 9:05:00 PM

thank you ;} I believe in us too !

James Foulk

Date: 6/15/2011 2:02:00 PM

very romantic and so tender and warm.

Debbie Duncan
Date: 12/11/2011 11:43:00 PM

thank you James ;}

Don Johnson

Date: 6/14/2011 1:37:00 AM

when love flows an so enthralled, we hang on every word, but time it has you maybe blackballed, worry has the love time blurred without a feather to fly:) great love verse babe, xo, Don

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/13/2011 8:17:00 AM

sweetly romantic and intensely emotional piece Debbie.. enjoyed and thankxx for your sweet comments on my body of work luv..

Debbie Duncan
Date: 12/11/2011 11:44:00 PM

thank you Linda ;} have a sweet day !

Crystal Wilkins

Date: 6/12/2011 2:19:00 AM

a sweet poem, love is always filled with uncertainty and if its meant to be all the doubts in the world will be worth it, a lovely write, i look forward to reading more of your work

Debbie Duncan
Date: 6/13/2011 2:05:00 AM

thank you for reading my words on Love ;} Debbie