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Each time you smiled at me, we grew closer...... The hearts heard each other; a mild rhythm was born... Pain be it or smile be it....they enjoyed it together; One day, we stood apart and compared the mild hearts..... A natural beat became a comma after every statement.... words of the heart changed to words about the heart... The purity was stepped upon.......the sanctity drifted away..... There is a silent cry, in rhythm again..... Hurts, bleeds, cries.....heart, poor heart....

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Date: 4/25/2011 3:25:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Hemanth. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 4/23/2011 3:36:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative poetry tonight ..my favorite subject and theme..LUV ... hope your time on P.S. will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..
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