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L*o*v*e*

As I watch her from across the open squares way ~ Beneath this black and white zebrad umbrellas, curtain and stage.... Navigating, throughout the hurried animated crowds While holding fast to the facades below their colourful awnings Trying to avoid to escape, caricatures candied, perpetual, and sometimes pelting rain.... Which seems to often fall amid the winters erebus of her days Eyes to the ground, as she somehow seems a bit encumbered Wiping this jeweled tear, from upon the treasure of her lovely face ~ Thinking, what would I wish to tell her To bring comfort and hope, to her priceless heart and soul!? For I have sincerely loved and cared for her, profoundly This elegantly splendid light~aside the pages of so many different ways.... What shall I bestir unto her; among these dreams in which I have pondered?! As she passes through this golden glasses revolving door ~ Slowly, her enchantingness fading from my view While tossing these stars, of sparklings glitters, I would desire to impart.... Taking another sip from my drink, as I candidly contemplate!? Life, can often be as though standing before a broken mirror Scattered reflections amid the images in which we find Humanities ships asail; tossed to and fro, atop the waverings wistful waves.... The best one shall ever know from among the most Is the flutterings of these ebbs and flows Parabolic perceptions of souls; eyes, which seize and then blink These dawns of love~these shadows of dusk Like grasping dust; carried, upon the horizontal planes.... By the winds of time; preludes, towards the inevetable portals of change! Standing, as she now exits the building; considering, what shall I tell her? What will I say? While I make my way, to the place wherein "Her Beauty," waits ~ This moment of a heart; to caress these, sometimes storms.... "Hello dear, I haven't seen you in awhile, how are you today?" As I place my hand about her perfectly pleasant shoulder, tightly ~ And tenderly smile with this knowing embrace, that shall never, dissipate! Whispering softly into her ear, "don't worry dear, for everything will be ok" Making our way, through the vibrant and bustling crowds Pointing to her precious, somewhere, beyond the breaking clouds Towards the sun as it glows; peaking, through these drapes, of soon to be, ending rain Reflections.... Smiling as I wave, and then call, her coruscatings, beautiful name ~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ L*O*V*E*

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/21/2010 8:10:00 AM
I can tell I'll be learning alot about poetry from U. Now, where's that fav. list button....
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Date: 7/29/2010 9:11:00 AM
very lovely and tender poem!..a pleasure to read
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Date: 7/27/2010 6:02:00 AM
Very beautiful, soft flowing words. Very well written with strong feeling.
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Date: 7/16/2010 2:52:00 PM
Amazing words~ I dont ususally say much because these words speek for themselves. Thank you!~ Molly
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Date: 6/13/2010 12:43:00 AM
sounds so endearing, John. the soul & it's eyes(: it's amazing how one's love and their appearence can enlighten you so. lovely write.much love to you! ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 6/10/2010 10:48:00 AM
Please get as many people as possible to read Hush Missing Child <3
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Date: 6/10/2010 10:35:00 AM
This touched me really liked sarah x
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Date: 6/5/2010 10:23:00 AM
another breathtaking write of yours filled with lovers so deep in love. one that is hard to find, because you don't find it, it simply is brought to you, for it was meant to happen. she sounds only an angel of beauty that can only be seen in the sky by you, and you alone(: oh, how lucky you are to have an angel love you as much as this one does.amazing. -always&forever lynette
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Date: 6/4/2010 11:07:00 PM
HI, again, John. You have got to be the most romantic poet at the Soup (of the men at least!) Oh, and there is HG too!! Gosh, forgot what I said to you in my last message. So what IS your professoin? Please let me know! lUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/4/2010 8:18:00 PM
Your admiration and compassion for this sad lady are genuinely moving, John. "Don't worry...everthing will be ok" is what we need to hear sometimes when we are in the throes of despair. You have such a comforting nature, John, and are ever the true gentleman any woman would be lucky to have in her life. So nice to see you posting again, dear friend. We welcome your return! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/4/2010 6:27:00 PM
woe! John, I love the perception you give when it comes to love. The eyes you speak up give a healty smile to anyone reading your love poem. And once again in a womens point of view, what women would not want to be called love. You are a very charming guy. Nice on the repost. A wonderful poem no matter how many times I have read it. Thank you for your sweet heart and fantastic comments. Always Sidney LeeAnn
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Date: 6/4/2010 6:09:00 PM
first i will send you soup mail,..p.d
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Date: 6/4/2010 6:02:00 PM
A hauntingly beautiful poem..obviously written for a beautiful enchantress! Great job as always, John! Totally enjoyed and will have to read it again:) Oh, not to worry, my "Time Can Not Erase" is just something I began to write when I was in a bad place some time ago..wasn't able to complete it. However, this a.m. I thought I would submit it in a contest but...too late! Contest's closed! LOL.. Thanks for your kind concern, my friend..Take care. ..Love and Peace, Audrey
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Date: 6/4/2010 7:13:00 AM
Extremely Romantic and Beautiful,One of the best poems of yours,one for my favorites John!Celene.
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