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My mind is racing, unsure which way to go. Logic or love, Love or logic?
My heart beats faster as you walk near, my hands start to shake and my
legs are a quiver. Looking into your brilliant eyes, my chest grows heavy
and my mouth is dry. Breathless and confused, OH... what do I do? What do I do?
Looking up into the heavens praying for rain so that you may not see the 
tear drops running down my face. Someone save me! Please don't let me fall, 
the ground is moving from beneath my feet. Too late, there you are.
Smiling like my miracle and my heart is yours once again.
                     Love or logic? Logic or love?

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  1. Date: 12/4/2009 6:32:00 AM
    it is wonderful...i feel this too... everything shifting everything so scary not knowing what to do... beautiful

  1. Date: 12/2/2009 12:43:00 AM
    The logic of love like a broken winged bird, Cries out in pain just to be heard.Nice poem Ashley.I enjoyed it! Thanks for your kind comments.God Bless....PRINCE

  1. Date: 10/29/2009 1:29:00 PM
    its love its in our heart

  1. Date: 7/24/2009 7:11:00 AM
    Great flow to this poem and love and logic seldom mix exelent write keep posting Ashley

  1. Date: 7/8/2009 8:31:00 AM
    That sounds like new love to me!!! I love your description of the way you feel.

  1. Date: 7/6/2009 1:22:00 PM
    An age old question and no true answer, lol. Great atmosphere and suspense. Well done. Regards Heidie

  1. Date: 7/5/2009 10:06:00 PM
    very sweet. I can almost hear your heart beating faster as I read this. the prayer for rain to disguise your tears is especially nice imagery. Thanks for sharing this. -Yoni

  1. Date: 7/5/2009 9:58:00 AM
    Love....definitely follow your heart...the logical mind has broken more hearts than anything else in the universe. VERY GOOD WRITE!

  1. Date: 7/5/2009 8:31:00 AM
    I find myself fighting, too. As the logic eats away at it, I try to indulge. It's not going to be there forever. Nice take on this timeless confusion.

  1. Date: 7/4/2009 11:21:00 PM

  1. Date: 7/2/2009 2:00:00 PM
    i like this i love the theme

  1. Date: 7/1/2009 8:05:00 PM
    oh that was awesome and it definately sounds like something i am going thru myself lately with my gf. she has totally went off the deep end. i love her so much but its like i dont know what way to turn and the question is it love or logic? i love it keep up the good work girl