Love

LoVe and passion LoVe two hearts entwined LoVe now adays out of fashion LoVe can too be blind LoVe the ultimate high LoVe for which we all yearn LoVe you can never buy LoVe like respect you earn LoVe that is unconditional LoVe like the marriage vows LoVe that is though mutal LoVe maddness it spells!! LoVe takes on many a form LoVe a feeling of self worth LoVe from the day your born LoVe no greater force on earth Already on here back in 2012 just like poems time,space,moon, stars changed Couple of lines tweeked a little insperation l guess curent times

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Hannington Mumo

Date: 6/28/2021 10:41:00 AM

Love is undebatably the profoundest feeling ever in humans as well as in the Creator's all-perfect heart - variously illustrated in numberless sundry junctures...rich examples of which your great composition lists hereinabove. Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/20/2021 9:19:00 PM

Love is a very important word in the human language, as your gem of a poem illustrates. I enjoyed it, David. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/18/2021 9:50:00 AM

very nice one on love. I like how you put the big V in each one!!

David Scott
Date: 6/18/2021 11:34:00 PM

Thankyou for kind words the hightend v to give emphasis on love though this one as well as others time space words moon ect was thinking of changing pattern instead of keep starting each line with same word bit repetitive

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/17/2021 8:14:00 AM

Yeah, you're right, David, it is love that keeps us going:)

David Scott
Date: 6/18/2021 12:00:00 AM

Thankyou for kind words nice to write for others love always xx

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 6/17/2021 4:12:00 AM

Amazing...love that last line, wrapping it up so perfectly. .no greater force indeed <3 always, Laura

David Scott
Date: 6/18/2021 12:02:00 AM

Thankyou for your kind words this was on here in 2012 just tweeked couple of lines think you comebted in old version love always xx