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Love - End Line Word Contest

What is this thing called ….love What is the difference it ….makes Are you too young or even too old ….the writer asks is this thing called love all over the ….world Or is it just here in my heart, ready to....go I have plenty of love, enough to go....around End of word = love makes the world go around penned 29 July 2015

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James Inman

Date: 11/12/2015 11:06:00 AM

Beautiful write Seren.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/10/2015 5:19:00 AM

Great end line themed poem here on the winners' list..Way to go..Congrats..Sara

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/8/2015 7:35:00 PM

Very clever and interesting. Congratulations.

Neva Romaine

Date: 11/5/2015 3:28:00 PM

Hey Seren, a warm and hearty congratulations on your winning poem in the End Line contest! A wonderful treatise on love! Excellent. Be Blessed, Neva

Skat A

Date: 11/5/2015 12:17:00 PM

Seren, Congratulations on your End Line Win. LOVE SKAT

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/4/2015 11:15:00 PM

Congrats on huge win Seren with this superb write!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/4/2015 4:17:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 11/4/2015 12:04:00 PM

Short, but most worthy of an end line poem, Seren. Congratulations on this fine win. // paul

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 8/14/2015 12:48:00 PM

Dear Seren, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Thank-YOU for supporting my contest. Superb Quill It has been a long time since last we spoke. I am reintroducing myself to the SOUP with this contest. I am so much healthier since I quit drinking 2 and a half years ago. I will soup mail you soon. I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire
Date: 8/14/2015 12:59:00 PM

Dear Seren, I really like the short version of your entrée but if YOU wish to expand upon it, it would be a pleasure to read. I LOVE YOU...HG

Darlene Gifford

Date: 8/10/2015 9:15:00 AM

Hi, Seren! This is an old saying, but if you can say something to make it fresh again then why not. You said, below that you were going to rewrite so my best to you in the contest. And thanks for reading one of my poems. Yours in poetry, ~~Darlene

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/30/2015 11:55:00 PM

So true Seren, love is beyond all territories n unending! Beautiful write!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/30/2015 3:38:00 PM

you clever girl. You chose a good phrase on Love!! I gotta get to this one!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 7/30/2015 6:58:00 PM

Thx Andrea t is easy to do .... Seren,

Eric Boddie

Date: 7/30/2015 3:02:00 PM

go tell the world....that Love is more precious than a pearl....the most valuable thing that is absolutely free....and over here, that's all you can get from me.....;)

Seren Roberts
Date: 7/30/2015 7:01:00 PM

Sounds like words of a song... Am cold. So off to bed Nos da. ...Seren

Jan Allison

Date: 7/30/2015 2:56:00 PM

wonderful message Seren - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx