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ETYMOLOGY - the meaning of a name Poetry Contest
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I wait, then rush, too lost in dreams just sit, contemplate, perhaps abashed as rest of the world rushes past persistent yet cautious unencumbered by rule trajectory undulates but I'm not a fool the right to linger freedom of thought cannot be shaped or lesson taught path is seen by me alone or lost by me should mood dictate seeking the meaning of life, prepared to wait

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Date: 9/6/2023 12:28:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest, DD. This was a very thought provoking piece and it gave me some pause about all the rules. Congratulations:)
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Date: 9/6/2023 12:39:00 PM
Thank you Suzette - it was a fun idea x
Date: 9/6/2023 8:32:00 AM
Dallying inward. Self knowledge and awareness growth through inner contemplation. Genius! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/6/2023 8:40:00 AM
Thank you Anaya x

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