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lost wings

A heavy weight 
Black shadows 
Upon the shoulders 
Lead heavy 
As wings fall 
Expelled from 
The garden 
That of Eden 
Bent down 
In grief 
I cried 
love lived 

My burning passion 
Shattered to 
be saved 
Broken grows stronger 
Like a fireworks 
Lighting up 
The sky 

On my knees 
I fell 
without mercy 
As the cobra 
Danced around truth 
Biting emotions 
To the ground 
Drove straight 
Into the dark side 
Of a dream 
Boiling nightmares 
Sewing hell 
Into the deep 

A distorted face 
Clouds vision 
No longer 
Do I see 
Beautiful colours 
Instead of petals 
Your thorns 
Rip the heart 
Black turns 
The rose and dies 

Growing two horns 
Boiling stew 
Seething hot pain 
To begin roasting 
Pushing to 
the deepest 
Tormenting in hell 
Hissing spitting out 
A poisonous 
stew of words 

A forked tongue 
The deceiver 
Crawling under 
The skin 
Coiling serpent 
Without truth 
Burning lies 
Twists then turns 

Destroyer of dreams 
Nightmares burns 
A circle 
Drawn with 
a poisonous tongue 
Within hell 
Dancing moths 
In silver shadows 
Reality one 
see's light 

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  1. Date: 10/10/2013 12:26:00 AM
    Wow, intense and deep. Beautifully written. I love your style!

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 9:02:00 PM
    Very deep and meaningful expressions, liam

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 8:52:00 PM
    wow...your metaphors are very deep and dark in this poem, you my friend have crafted a masterpiece...I love it!

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 7:32:00 PM
    Pray for God's protection over your dreams dear heart, and soon, they will be butterflies dancing round your soul, enjoyed this, but I am praying for sunnier words, tomorrow maybe if you please? love and hugs xxx

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 6:30:00 PM
    A very deep, emotional poem that is filled with amazing visuals. I can surely feel your pain in these words and images. Terrific piece of poetry! I loved it!

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 6:26:00 PM
    Well written Liam, you have a wonderful way with words, my friend....peter

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 4:49:00 PM
    This is brilliant, Liam! I love the visuals you have painted with your words. Very emotional.