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Lost Tracks

Lost tracks engraved in milky snow, endless, spread into nowhere. I look for last autumn leaves under white sparkling cover, lost in time. The silence of the fading day rests on me as timeless songs of birds. I look for lost tracks from the past but can only hear whispering voices from misty woods, thoughtful walks in brilliant fluffy white.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/2/2009 7:16:00 AM
Fluffy...I love double lettering xD jojojo, nice poem, reminds me of a highway, without the dry concrete cracks and salt totems; thanks for the experience =D
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Date: 8/28/2009 4:08:00 AM
Very descriptive. I can just see the scene even though it doesn't snow here much. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/27/2009 5:25:00 PM
Lovely, it gives a feeling of the change that will be coming soon! Nicely done! ~ Carrie
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