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Whither wilt thou wander wayfaring wanderer For Aladdin’s lamp shall well without__ be camped Thus from whence__ will thine offence__ be quenched Not from city’s light will approval be stamped Wander thus___ ponder___ wayfaring wanderer For thou shall thus camp by life’s watered roots Until thine offence shall thus be quenched Thus thou shall eat leaves and pluck fruits Healing balm shall thus be in thine own palm As the healing balm cure shall thus be pure All fear shall of waters of life be banished Sacred light of holy city be near A great gnashing teeth of the mind’s belief The roaring of the lion darkness of time For Lamb is the light as darkness take flight Peace as a fleece the lamb lies with the lion

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Date: 4/7/2010 10:36:00 PM
i loved your use of words in this poem.light can overcome the greatest darkness.no matter how never-ending it may seem. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 4/5/2010 10:05:00 AM
enjoyed reading
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Date: 4/5/2010 8:41:00 AM
Great write in this one like the spaced thoughts in the first and second quatrain...I especially like the last two lines..What a day...When all God's creatures will once again eat the grass, herbs, nuts, and berries so that there will be no slaughter or violence against another animal or man...Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for the kind words on my works...Sara
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Date: 4/2/2010 8:51:00 AM
Alas , this is a very touching piece indeed John, many a interpretation can be contrived from this,,,Well done indeed...God Bless. Taz
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Date: 4/2/2010 8:44:00 AM
I think this is the essence of your poem: For Lamb is the light as darkness take flight Really like that line, JOhn and thanks for responding to my April Fools blog. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 4/1/2010 6:40:00 PM
Very good John, as usual. Thank you for all your kind remarks about my work. Charles
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Date: 4/1/2010 12:25:00 PM
Alleluia .. for Lamb is the light as darkness take flight.. Amen brother Moses and so beautiful your elegant words..thankxxx so very much .. I am deeply touched .. for choosing MAMA MIA as your second place winner .. thankxxx so very much... my MOM would be so proud.. this special contest brought out so much in all the winners and appreciate your luv and dedication in sponsoring a challenging contest for us all.. blessings bestowed my dear brother in Christ..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/1/2010 12:22:00 PM
I'm working on a crossstitch right now that is a Lion with a Lamb in front of it ... too much syncronicity happening in my life right now ... its strange ... smile ... beautiful write here. I really enjoy the different forms you use ... I seem to be "stuck" in Free Verse at the moment ...
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Date: 4/1/2010 12:00:00 PM
Wander not I sayth the acceptant, But on the course of comet tails I fly. Seest thou not the onynx jewel of darkness in the eye of Lamb or lion? Wander not sayeth I. Accept the cup full and brimming and have no longing for all is gifted thee. If teeth thee have then chew sayth I for it is thine gift. If voice thy have then sing sayeth I for song is thy gift. Let loose the concept of wander and be a doing self.
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Date: 4/1/2010 10:45:00 AM
The Lamb does cast the darkness from our lives and you, my friend, do the same for me. Thanks so much for your encouraging words on "My Spiritual Partner." Chris was my "light" for many years, and remains so in the afterlife. Although I miss him terribly, I know we shall be reunited one day. God bless you for always bringing the spiritual qualities to the forefront. Much love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/31/2010 11:28:00 PM
Easter greetings John thank you your your welcome blog comments.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/31/2010 9:30:00 PM
It's nicely rhymed poem
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