Lost Sense

Amidst the doom days...Of her passing... Mourns rivalry....Against wind scornfulness... Swept abreast... Fields shedding weep... No longer could the drums beat loud enough.. To silken ~ The grave face of sudden lost.. Whilst no longer... Did the future shed meaning.. Nor did the present or past ~ Serve sense...

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/28/2012 1:13:00 PM

John, congratulations with your poem featured on this awesome endings week of 2012. Wishing you the best of 2013 to come... luv * Linda

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/27/2012 1:52:00 PM

Every line has the ability to be a verse, plumping this up would aid the reader in understanding. Light & Love

John Boyle
Date: 11/28/2012 8:14:00 PM

Opps.. Not a poet... lol not not a poem... :)

John Boyle
Date: 11/28/2012 8:13:00 PM

Thanks so much... Truth is I am not a poem nor do I really know anything about the proper way to write.. I just toss out a few mumbles now and then... And let people ( if they have the time) read and come up with their own meanings of it... lol... Have a great day... Take care