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Lungs that burst life that escaped when poor souls rant and ranted more instead of reciting poetic verse I pray one day they find a way to re-discover kindness I say sadly, this dream, will never be Hens and co?cks, birds of a feather singing on the rudeness tree

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Rhona Mcferran

Date: 12/28/2018 3:53:00 AM

So sorry that people like that feel the need to antagonize a poetry site... very clever poem, though. Thanks for being one of the 'voices of reason'! ;)

Sand Blown

Date: 12/27/2018 9:18:00 AM

checked 'kindness' in the thesaurus andt there are dozens of alternate meanings, many 'color's for the raven's 'nevermore'

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/27/2018 6:25:00 AM

Sometimes I realize I pay too little attention to the "rants" friends tell me happen on the Soup. Then all of a sudden, a friend is gone from the site. I appreciate your call for civility, Arthur, and hope the message is received by the right people. It would be great if we all liked each other, but at the very least, let's treat each other with respect. Bravo, my friend. Hugs, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/27/2018 5:58:00 AM

Good one. Enjoyed reading this morning. Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 12/27/2018 5:18:00 AM

Lets hope that second stanza comes true Art and you are making poetry great and i'm trying with my pooetry lol:-) hugs jan xx

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 12/27/2018 5:18:00 AM

I raise a voice of prayer along with you, Arthur, for every human soul.. let alone poets to "rediscover kindness"! A wonderful write unfolding Love and Light of a poet! My deepest regards. Be blessed always.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/27/2018 4:10:00 AM

Making Poetry Great again, oh tiss me!