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Lost Motion

Lost motion I saw her always laughing from inside I wanted to know cause was behind bliss One day she remained silent I saw I found her within glamour drowned She explained job cut money drought Boy friend faltered mum turned away Leaving alone with alien guy Father ignored to recognize her Days begin to pass heavily wearily. Day by day she changed her self into Indifferent passive, I caught myself to Feeling her within a tumble, One day I proposed to be her holder, She raised her eyes not showing courage She replied experience is way to believe I am happy to find you as a friend of life Then we started to go hither and thither On the bus on weekends Days passed, found it on lost motion.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/1/2014 9:25:00 AM
Thank you very much for kind read and suggestion.
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Date: 1/31/2014 5:00:00 PM
There is a great poem here. Your language though is stilted. Do you read your poems aloud as you write them? I find that helps with the rhythm. Keep it up, I will return.
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