Lost Love

Like the sun's eternal warmth Our love is beyond this earth Victory over all the worlds wealth nothing compared to Eternal passion only you can bring He came along, tall, dark, handsome Under a bus you threw me, no stopping Real love can't be bought or forced, set you free Two of you together, my soul torn Single life again, memory of you forever mine. 01/19/2017 Message in a Bottle Contest

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John Herlihy

Date: 1/29/2017 11:05:00 PM

A tight, compact and powerful poem. It doesn't have to win a contest to be a winner. This poem has already won simply by existing. A sore topic sweetly handled. JH

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2017 9:35:00 PM

I really like how you did this, Bruce. I don't see congrats and it strikes me that you did not entitle this Message in a Bottle. I wish I Had seen this earlier and told you. To get on the winner list you had to give it that title. I think it had the potential to be a winner! SEVEN