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Lost Love

what is this feeling, not grief my heart wail, constrict and hurt why the promise feel distant i still wait in vain. **** distance gives way to longing a need to meet and devour the strong thread binding two hearts grows weaker with time. © (3 Feb '15) Contest: Dodoitsu by Dr. Ram

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Date: 2/5/2015 5:37:00 PM
powerful emotional pen nadiya deep excellent piece bless you
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Date: 2/5/2015 8:58:00 PM
Thank you again Liam... be blessed
Date: 2/4/2015 5:12:00 PM
Great emotional write my dear Nadiya! Must visit some of your others! Love and hugs, Jack XOX
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Date: 2/4/2015 9:21:00 PM
Thank you dear Jack... pleased that you took time ti read my poems...love, nad!
Date: 2/4/2015 2:59:00 AM
Excellent write Nad. God bless>love>Good luck -rajat
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Date: 2/4/2015 4:05:00 AM
Thank you Rajat... hope its worthy of your praise... nad!
Date: 2/3/2015 11:13:00 PM
Excellent.Very emotional write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 2/4/2015 12:13:00 AM
Thank you Ravi for your comment and visit... regards, nad!
Date: 2/3/2015 6:20:00 PM
this is nice to see. I did not even know this contest had gotten started. Good luck in it!
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Date: 2/3/2015 8:43:00 PM
Thank you Andrea for dropping by... hugs,nad!
Date: 2/3/2015 4:54:00 PM
The strong emotions of conflict and love lost are well written in this poem. Great job!
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Date: 2/3/2015 8:42:00 PM
Thank you Laura for reading my pen and your lovely words... regards, nad!
Date: 2/3/2015 3:42:00 PM
such an intense feeling of longing and loneliness - good luck in the contest:-) a 7 from me :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/3/2015 8:41:00 PM
Thank you dear friend... be blessed... nad!
Date: 2/3/2015 2:54:00 PM
Good expression of emotions, nice write.
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Poesy Relish
Date: 2/3/2015 3:29:00 PM
Thank you very much John

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