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Lost Love

the day we met i wasn't in love with you u loved me i had no clue v had a friendship tht was very true one day i came crying to you the reason very well u knew that day u promised me u'l never let me feel blue u held me in ur arms my face again had that charm u told me trust me il do u no harm that same day i fell in love with you you gave me ur first kiss this very first feeling i'l everyday miss few days later u said u had to go coz thr is some1 other who loves u even more there was a fake smile which again i wore i had a question in my heart when u had no true feelings y did u give it a start??? y did u make me fall for u?

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Date: 1/19/2012 6:32:00 AM
I loved your poem ..Congrats Freny keep up the good work!
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Date: 1/18/2012 3:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 1/17/2012 6:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Freny. Love, Carol P.S. you can find the featured poets down the center of PoetrySoup Homepage. There are 4 pages of them this week and you can click and read and leave comments to the other poets. The poems are changed around each day giving your poem more exposure. The poems are up from Sunday to the next Sunday
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Date: 1/8/2012 4:25:00 AM
its so damn difficult to get over someone u love. i hope u feel better soon. most of the time pain does bring out the best of writing...execellent work.
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Freny Gilbert
Date: 1/8/2012 5:03:00 AM
thx

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