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Lost Life

I'm am the girl who sits all alone with blood stained sleeves Lost in a cold world That lies and deceives I'm plagued with misery That has left me bitter and broken When I lost you Part of me died to All I know how to do is cut then maybe I'll be ok if I keep bleeding just to know I'm still alive I'm stuck in a nightmare I see you but I know your not real I'm so numb please let me feel I'm to weak I can barely speak Blood pours out of my vein Soon I will feel no pain As I let these pills take me away.

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Robert Pettit

Date: 2/11/2011 9:50:00 PM

Suicide is no way out of problems. It causes new problems for those who love you. This is very descriptive work. It needs a few spelling corrections, but it has no trouble in delivering its message.

Molly Alcorn

Date: 12/31/2010 10:22:00 PM

What a sad, heart-wrenching poem. As one who knows this pain, trust me when i say it'll get better. Just hold on until then -Molly

Skat A

Date: 12/31/2010 6:19:00 PM

Ashley, congrats on your featured poem of the week. Hope you are enjoying the new year. May you be blessed with a wonderful & joyful New Year! Take care*Luv~SKAT

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 12/28/2010 6:31:00 AM

Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Thanks for sharing this with us and have a wonderful week ahead. Love always, Adeleke

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/27/2010 9:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Ashley. Love, Carol