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Lost Lands In Between

Solitary spaces for lost thoughts, images betwixt that intervene, found in iks, ends and even eens; in between what may not have been of this land we've often seen. In innocence cross seas of sky, pull pearls from pockets in the mind. Search for the hidden reasons why where wanton thoughts are left behind. If one sits still too long and stares and sinks deep down in icky ink only slips, slides or swerves in verve - but bumps into dark doublethink! Some see how to turn on the lights, points on star tips keep getting bright. Watch wonders never seen before, where there's no rule, wrong or right. Try close listening, hear the ticks crowded cricket strums from the sticks of words that rhyme or songs to time. Kindly look through one lone haiku that tiny crack with views anew. Rhyme 22 Lines 143 Words (Dedicated to Christel Pilson)

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Date: 1/11/2022 11:12:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Greg Gaul
Date: 1/14/2022 5:11:00 AM
Beata, thanks for your visit and congrats on your fine work too.
Date: 1/11/2022 8:25:00 PM
Great and beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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Greg Gaul
Date: 1/14/2022 5:10:00 AM
Christuraj, your comments and visit is most appreciated.
Date: 12/30/2021 12:42:00 PM
Poetry has such power and depth that most just stumble over unless they take the time to let the words sink in. New year blessings Greg. xxoo
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Date: 12/30/2021 1:09:00 PM
Glad to tickle your creative ear. Thanks for your comment and visit.

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