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Lost Insanity

---a song I wrote based on some friends' expierences--- Less and less places I can hide Whispering secrets abound And I’m still trapped inside Shuddering chills all around Red rubies dry in the night Crystals shimmer in light And all the while you stand and stare Seeing the pain you cause, but don’t care Now you drown in vanity And I’m losing insanity I wish you would understand What it is you do to me I cannot take a stand And I will never be free Red rubies dry in the night Crystals shimmer in light You come around to me Causing the bruises I see We’re living in tragedy And I’m losing insanity I turn my eyes away from you Pray to God to end this pain Wait for you to do what you came to do And I’m burning in shame [Refrain] We’re living in tragedy You’re swimming in vanity And I’m losing insanity Ooh, ooh…aah, aah Red rubies dry in the night Crystals shimmer in light You are all of my fears You laugh at my tears Will this be my fatality Once I’ve lost insanity Lost…Insanity…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/23/2012 10:21:00 AM
Awesome lyric once again...great wording & a very nice flow as well. Superb stuff!!! What about the book? Finished or still workin' on it?? Let me know if it hits the shelves.
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Date: 2/5/2012 12:57:00 PM
:P You are insane, girl! I enjoyed the rhymes and wish to read more! :] - David
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Date: 1/28/2012 1:09:00 AM
This is just Greeeeeaaaaaaatt@@@@!!!!!!!! :D Always, Laura
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Date: 1/25/2012 10:24:00 AM
I wish I had a better understanding on the forms of poetry so I could give you a clear confident comment on your writing. I will tell you I do love reading poetry. I thank you for sharing yours today I enjoyed reading it Rebecca. Love, Carol
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