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Lost In You

Lost in you In the wake of this new morning With its skyline dark of hue Floating clouds conceal its warning Still my mind is lost in you Counted moments I am feeling Laced with simple dreams to find Of the endless breezes flowing In the face of all this time Distant footsteps find me walking Drenched in fragrant sorted flow Caught of patterns sweetly forming Matters not where I may go For your love, my destination Sits a’ wait atop the hill Whispers call of my direction For this wanting heart to fill As the sun now greets me smiling With its light so pure of feel Casting shadows long and winding In a silence soft and real Thoughts do bring a glad sensation When my eyes they see it true In the wake of this new morning As my mind is lost in you
Good morning soupers

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Date: 12/7/2016 1:22:00 PM
such a beautiful morning poem, lost in thoughts of love... enjoyed this so much.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/7/2016 1:38:00 PM
Thank you Rebecca for your always kind words about my poetry. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.
Date: 12/7/2016 11:36:00 AM
Chris, Chris, Chris, how do you do it? They just keep rollin off the line, but the quality doesn't suffer at all, it is always amazing writing. Great work!
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Chris Green
Date: 12/7/2016 12:50:00 PM
Thanks so very much my friend for such an encouraging comment on my poem. I appreciate your visit today.
Date: 12/7/2016 11:17:00 AM
- Beautiful thoughts an early morning, Chris ... a lovely way to start a new and unused today ... a dose C -vitamin :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/7/2016 11:22:00 AM
Thanks so very much Anne-Lise. Hugs to you too my friend.
Date: 12/7/2016 10:30:00 AM
I love that third stanza, Chris, your description on the whole poem is wonderful.. Hugs Eve
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Chris Green
Date: 12/7/2016 11:22:00 AM
Thanks so very much Eve. I am happy you enjoyed this.
Date: 12/7/2016 8:54:00 AM
Good morning, Chris :)... How wonderful. I must remember this little phrase to tell my boyfriend: my mind is lost in you... Fave, thanks.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/7/2016 10:06:00 AM
Thanks so very much Darren and please be my guest. :)
Date: 12/7/2016 8:04:00 AM
Hi Chris, Good morning! Thanks for greeting me with a with a spectacular scene. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 12/7/2016 10:06:00 AM
Thank you for joining me this morning at this poem dear Alexis. I always enjoy when you stop by
Date: 12/7/2016 8:00:00 AM
You're like a machine, Chris Green, pumping out great lines; you make me see with your eyes.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/7/2016 10:05:00 AM
Thanks so much Phil. A machine huh, well if I am I'm out of warranty, so you never know what the next day will bring. :)
Date: 12/7/2016 7:58:00 AM
Top o' the morn to you too Chris, as always your sentiments are splendiferous. I get lost in your poetry. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/7/2016 10:04:00 AM
Thanks so very much my sweet friend. If you need any help finding your way out, just let me know. :)
Date: 12/7/2016 7:46:00 AM
What a great way to start the day with this beautiful poem that reads so smoothly and kindly. Thank you for sharing Chris :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/7/2016 10:03:00 AM
Thank you again and again Heidi. I always look forward to your visits.
Date: 12/7/2016 6:01:00 AM
Good morning...:) Good poem too..Sending me in a positive mood...Lovely.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/7/2016 10:03:00 AM
Then it was worth writing. Thank you so very much my sweet friend.

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