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lost in the ripples

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lost in the ripples

Mirrored mountains gleam
 Ripples erase reflections
 Water moves away

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  1. Date: 5/20/2014 9:42:00 AM
    Love this haiku! I can close my eyes and see the picture you painted so clearly. // paul

    Eggins Avatar Jayne Eggins
    Date: 5/20/2014 10:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Paul :) I love Haiku but I think its such a gentle art I am loath to write unless I get it right I do experiment I have hundreds of haiku I have never Jayne x
  1. Date: 4/2/2013 12:28:00 AM
    Thank for commenting on one my haiku's. I too enjoyed reading your haiku. Good work.