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Lost in Space

The floating satellite
Was sending pictures back,
We saw the worlds up close
And endless miles of black.

But then a massive craft
Appeared and beamed an arc.
Our satellite was hit
And everything went dark…

Jack Horne for Nathan’s Deep Space contest

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  1. Date: 10/8/2012 12:11:00 PM
    Congratulations on your placement in Nathan's "Deep Space" contest Jack. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 11:55:00 PM
    hey, now, here is one I somehow had missed. Awesome to see it here as I go thru winners' list. Big congrats, my friend.

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 11:25:00 PM
    Congrats on you win my friend Jack. hugs!!

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 6:53:00 PM
    Congratulations on winning with this entry. You just might be describing the inevitable fate of the Voyager probes we sent into space years ago.

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 5:08:00 PM
    This one is different than the rest I have read....I like where you took this. Simple and clear cut image you have created ...and it leaves a little mystery too. Congrats on your winning placement in the contest !!

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 4:22:00 PM
    JACK, congratulations with your awesome poem in Nathan's "deep space" contest.. enjoyed~ xox~pd

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 4:18:00 PM

  1. Date: 10/5/2012 3:47:00 PM
    thanks for the support' nate

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 8:31:00 AM
    oh no all those billions for nothing....

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 10:47:00 PM
    An unfortunate end for all involved, but your poem tells it all! Thanks for visiting and commenting. One love Jack. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 6:50:00 AM
    Like this Jack even though you breed spiders in your bedroom, this is good ...xx

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 8:49:00 PM
    Hello, Jack... i'm on my way to find you... Danger Master Robinson! DANGER!""" <---- lol that is from a movie called "lost in space". an excellent write. Hope Nathan, enjoys your poem... xox~pd

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 4:13:00 PM
    I was thinking of entering this contest jack, could not think of anything to write, but boy this is good, 'hope i can bounce of it'

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 5:17:00 PM
    Scarey...this should do well in the contest..BG

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 5:06:00 PM
    super creative write Jack luv .. can envision that scarry moment through these fantastic words luv .. good luck ..

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 3:02:00 PM
    Earth to Mission Control....Earth to Mission Control?.....Is there anyone out there?.....Love the brevity of this poem and sudden power loss at the end...Aeronautics is risky business and I salute anyone who takes this on as a career...Enjoyed this clever write. :) gwendolen

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 1:15:00 PM
    Ha ha, this is a very clever write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this fabulous poem Jack! I bet you have a lot of fun coming up with this piece, this is something right up your alley is it not? Grandiose write, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 10:27:00 AM
    Good one jack like it xx

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 9:12:00 AM
    i like it. i like the rhyme, i like the subject, i like the brevity, and i like the playfulness of the poem. These are features i love to see in poetry

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 8:28:00 AM
    scary! and amazing poetry jack