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Lost In Own Region

lost in own region died in unborn calyxes flower is not known no one can pave to where's no way to go ahead ended in itself

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 3/24/2015 3:57:00 PM

Very nice pen BL! Very sad deep thoughts about life in this one, dear friend. Life can be so harsh at times I know and we all get lost sometimes, that's why I am so happy that I have Jesus to keep me going from him is where I get most of my strength every day. Enjoyed your senryu.A 7 from me! Wishing you a very lovely evening! In his light! God bless you! :) D.

Bl Devnath
Date: 3/25/2015 8:09:00 AM

Many thanks my lovely friend for your nice comment on my sad poem. When i feel blocked my ways i pray to God and He clears my blocked way, i believe too. You are really nice and thanks for your 7 too. Loved always,bl