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Lost In Oblivion

And in my passing will I become an unknown poet My writing lost in oblivion and quite obscure- O, sadly this thing called life is but a moment. Will my poems die and be forgotten or endure Perhaps my verses will cease and become blurred My writing lost in oblivion and quite obscure- And my name will be one not often heard I, oblivious in my secluded dark endless death- Perhaps my poems will cease and become blurred. But in this life I will be a poet until my last breath, With arms folded I will have found my eternal peace I, oblivious in my secluded dark endless death- Perhaps the love of my poetry will only increase Maybe I will take to the grave all my written sheets- With arms folded I will have found my eternal peace Perhaps the love of my poetry will only increase And in my passing will I become an unknown poet Maybe I will take to the grave all my written sheets- O, sadly this thing called life is but a short moment ____________________________ December 6, 2015 Terzanelle For the contest, Oblivion, sponsor, Rob Carmack Fifth Place

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Date: 12/24/2015 10:58:00 PM
Sorry that I previously missed replying to this contest being finished. Congrats on your well deserved win my friend.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/25/2015 7:25:00 AM
Robert, thanks so much for the congrats, I have been experimenting lately with forms, and Terzanelle is becoming a favourite, I love the repeating lines !!
Date: 12/20/2015 12:30:00 AM
Broken, Congrats on your win In Rob Carmack's Oblivion contest. Love ~LINDA~
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Constance La France
Date: 12/20/2015 8:18:00 AM
Linda thanks for visiting my poem and for the congratulations
Date: 12/19/2015 2:28:00 PM
BROKEN, Congrats on your Oblivion WIN **SKAT**
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Constance La France
Date: 12/19/2015 5:37:00 PM
Skat thanks for the congratulations
Date: 12/6/2015 9:42:00 PM
So eloquently written my friend! Surely a fantastic entry in thAt contest and a winner IMHO. A7 I AM NOW TAKING A BREAK FROM ENTERING NEW CONTESTS BUT GOOD LUCK MY FRIEND.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/7/2015 7:56:00 AM
Robert thanks for the beautiful comment and the 7!!! Yes, some rims we need a rest from contests. Hope you are well dear friend ~
Date: 12/6/2015 6:01:00 PM
Wishing you the best... SKAT
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Constance La France
Date: 12/6/2015 8:13:00 PM
Thanks for the support Skat ~

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