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Lost Heart

why did you push me away you promised my you would stay the clouds are so forever gray oh for where is that beautiful day my heart lost for my hand are broken my mind thinks no more for the lady of the kaftan look i will write something in my book so please help my hands of love heal please take away my heart of stone for i don't want to be alone the nightwalker

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/5/2010 2:15:00 PM

Pray, why did thee push me away, 'Twas thee who promised me that thy would stay, And yet the clouds are now forever gray..that would be how you MIGHT change this verse to dialect. Anyway it would be great to have as many entries from the UK as possible! Light & Love

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/5/2010 2:12:00 PM

dear poet..I am having a contest which focuses on the UK & Ireland, I would love it if you entered. The verse must be written as someone would speak in DIALECT and be of something which might have or did happen in the past in these places. The contest is called Bloody Sista's, please enter.