Lost Friend

Lives going in different directions Once close, now only closure Silence instead of laughter Trust broken forever Forsaken, forgotten Reconciliation rejected Ill will, resentment Empathy now apathy Nothing left to say Death of friendship For Susan’s Lost contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/10/2012 6:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's "Lost" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/9/2012 8:59:00 PM

jack.. congratulations with your awesome win. Hoping to read many contest tonight. always~ ;-) PD

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/8/2012 7:03:00 PM

And isn't it a sad situation. My biggest problem is outliving all of my friends. Congratulations Jack. I see your name in the winner list very often. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2012 3:34:00 PM

I really loved your entry, my friend. WEll deserved win. BIG congrats.

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 8/8/2012 10:05:00 AM

Congrats on your win in my contest! Good descriptions of what happens between friends. I really love "once close, now only closure" and your ending was spot on :)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 8/8/2012 5:43:00 AM

Deep emotions portrayed in this acrostic, Jack...stepping stones in life...that's what I teach my children regarding all relationships, even the bad ones...best of luck in the contest...try a space after the first letter of each row for a stronger effect..ps..not on here much these days..moving to a different home...luv,gwendolen

Len Gasun

Date: 8/7/2012 12:06:00 AM

Wonderful acrostic poem for a lost friend. It drew a tear. Good luck in the contest, Jack! Thanks also for dropping and giving your comments to my poem. More power!!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/5/2012 3:33:00 PM

Interesting approach to the contest...I haven't looked at them since we're back home..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by all my work and taking time to read and comment..Sara

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/5/2012 11:18:00 AM

You really captured the death of a friendship in this powerful acrostic Jack. Wishing you all the best for Susan's contest ;) lfde W

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/4/2012 10:04:00 PM

Wow, now that is a strong and powerful poem Jack! I really enjoyed the friend Acrostic, as this part of the poem showed raw emotion and how the death of friendship comes about! This is a fabulous and superior poem my friend! Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2012 9:51:00 PM

You wowed me again, Jack. I want to see you write a book with all your awesome itty bitty poems in it!!!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/4/2012 5:26:00 PM

I think we can all relate to this well constructed poem Jack. Best of luck in the contest.