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Lost Eyes

Within the haunted depths of your eyes I see pain, fear and desperstion uncertainty is printed on your face trapped in the nightmare of living searching for a way to escape finding only locked doors before you like a butterfly trapped in a glass you beat yourself unmercifully

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Date: 10/17/2016 12:41:00 PM
Since you have said, "I do not know" as to poetic form, I would say that this is free verse. Free Verse can be rhymed or un-rhymed, may have internal rhyme or none at all. The lines may be long or short. It can be broken into stanzas or not. It may be punctuated or not. Basically, a free verse poem's appearance is totally up to the poet.
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