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Lost Dream

Thorn pierced to your heart Betrayal of love Mercy cry heard loud, You're unforgiving Trust I broke, sinner. Pleading eyes now Hoping for light But sun you hide Vanishing still. Head tilted, Farewell sign My hands lame. Tears peek To lost Dream.

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Date: 10/15/2008 9:38:00 AM
Hi Theresa, Fantastic work on this poem. I love it. Ernie
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Date: 8/24/2008 4:28:00 AM
Teresita - Wonderful job on this poem - great use of the form - God bless
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