Lost Art

Going to Utah In busy sorting center Fallen on the floor

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Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 10/26/2014 7:12:00 PM

A powerful haiku. Congrats on being featured here this week. Please rate and comment "echo in the Wind" ty

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/5/2014 12:13:00 PM

well I see this is your one and only. Let's see you try some more. Take a peek at the contests and give one a try! Nobody will comment back around here unless you go comment to them first (in case you were wanting to get to know other poets). Welcome here with your first poem.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/5/2014 12:11:00 PM

Hey, JIM, I cannot believe it, you are over here at SOUP!!! and I am honored to be the only one who knows what this one is all about!! Let me see if you have any other poem posted.