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Lost In the Mist

LOST IN THE MIST Grey fingers soft as a pickpocket’s, Soundless and sightless, have taken the sun - Poacher in the kingdom of the blind. Guests and ghosts of the realm steal in and out, Cozened into thinking that Feet pressed to the ground - Ensure the lost land will be restored, The theft of the sun will be recouped. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Written 21st August 2014 by Sydney Peck For contest THROUGH THE MIST

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/31/2014 11:11:00 PM
this is so crappily done that you got away with it, KofC,lol... honestly, a symbolic view of revival well done.. more!.. thank you for gracing my contest and congrats!
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Date: 8/30/2014 4:50:00 PM
WOW, this is stunning, Sidney. I can't believe that someone who writes this well can actually say that he does not "get" haiku!!! Just read a few of them online, the modern ones that are so good. I think you will get it. And this one is for my faves!!
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Date: 8/30/2014 12:33:00 PM
The imagery in the poems is wonderful i too love the first line.many congrats:-) hugs Jan x
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Date: 8/22/2014 2:20:00 AM
Beautiful redemption Sydney. One of my favorites... Verlena
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Date: 8/20/2014 7:21:00 PM
You need more Syd especially to come up to that splendid first line. Light & Love
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