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As morning breaks gently, night goes to sleep. deep blue sky reminds me of the colour of your eyes as you left, begin to weep, you fade, horizons become much duller, ripples create visions on calm waters mist dances, swirling spiritual soul reflects silhouettes, distorting borders, you broke my heart, unable to console. now sad day turns into a dark cold night futureless, endless grief, total despair no longer my director, leading light, life's hard, uncompromising, so unfair.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/7/2017 6:43:00 PM
I agree this poem is sad yet well written Have a nice evening my friend.
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Roy Pett
Date: 8/8/2017 3:21:00 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment Darlene. :)
Date: 8/7/2017 10:00:00 AM
A sad heartbreaking poem, Roy!!
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Roy Pett
Date: 8/8/2017 3:19:00 AM
Thank you very much Jo for your very kind comment. :)
Date: 8/7/2017 7:22:00 AM
I can feel the hurt and sadness in this well written poem Roy! It reaches the reader :)
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Roy Pett
Date: 8/8/2017 3:18:00 AM
Thank you so much Heidi, you are very kind. :)

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